Struggling with Landing Page Conversion? Seeking Feedback and Tips

Landing Page Okay so I am lost. I have been working on my landing page for a week now. I have a .35 CPC on my meta ads but have converted 1 out of 82 clicks. I have absolutely no Idea what else to try. Please help, I am so lost at this point. I APPRECIATE ANY AND ALL FEEDBACK THANK YOU!! Landing Page 1: www.stevenbrixton.com/toolkit Landing page 2 (current): https://stevenbrxtn.beehiiv.com/subscribe my facebook ad copy text a iphone note that says: "Most creators are asleep at the wheel. They post every day. But their content leads nowhere. No funnel. No system. No income. My newsletter changes that. It's the engine behind every post I make — capturing attention, nurturing audience, and turning views into long-term revenue. Join the newsletter that helps thousands of creators turn content into cashflow. The longer you wait, the harder it is to catch up. - Steven Brixton"