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Struggling with Landing Page Conversion? Seeking Feedback and Tips

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Landing Page Okay so I am lost. I have been working on my landing page for a week now. I have a .35 CPC on my meta ads but have converted 1 out of 82 clicks. I have absolutely no Idea what else to try. Please help, I am so lost at this point. I APPRECIATE ANY AND ALL FEEDBACK THANK YOU!! Landing Page 1: www.stevenbrixton.com/toolkit Landing page 2 (current): https://stevenbrxtn.beehiiv.com/subscribe my facebook ad copy text a iphone note that says: "Most creators are asleep at the wheel. They post every day. But their content leads nowhere. No funnel. No system. No income. My newsletter changes that. It's the engine behind every post I make — capturing attention, nurturing audience, and turning views into long-term revenue. Join the newsletter that helps thousands of creators turn content into cashflow. The longer you wait, the harder it is to catch up. - Steven Brixton"

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Alfredo M.
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There are a lot of things that could be affecting your conversion. You might be targeting the wrong audience — a lot of curious, low-quality leads. This happens a lot with Facebook, at least in my experience. The copy isn’t great. I read both landing pages and I’m still not sure what you’re promoting. Is it a weekly curation of AI news plus “how-to” content? I’d say you should be more specific in your ads, landing page and audience. Pick one of your solutions and use it as the hook.
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Steven B.
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thank you brother, your feedback in much appreciated
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Steven B.
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any idea how to target the right audience on facebook?
Alfredo M.
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It's an iterative process — you have to imagine your buyer profile and run A/B/C/D tests around it. You'll eventually find the right fit, but even then, trends and algorithms change, and you'll need to adjust your strategy again. I recommend using an AI companion to help define your system and support the process with ideas and outputs. It can surface variables you didn’t realize were impacting performance.
Steven B.
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oh brother I have been using multiple models of AI, doing deep analytics, tons of web research. I just revised it again but yes you are right, I'm know it is iterative and continuous however I need to find that baseline with some sort of success. 1% seems random.

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